Creative Writing?

"We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect." -Anaïs Nin.

Writing is a way of working out your feelings for yourself, not always others, and I enjoy writing when I need to say something, but not to anyone or out loud.
I saw a post on Pinterest, (linked here) about fate and coincidence being personified and loved it so much that I wrote the start of a story, just describing the two.
Tell me what you think in the comments or on Google+
Here it is!

Down a dark alleyway in 1920’s London, a young man leant against a crate, looking slightly amusedly at the young woman before him. She, petite yet perhaps quietly overpowering sat with her legs crossed gracefully. Her poised, prepared appearance somehow complimented the handsome young man wearing a black suit with no jacket, his bowtie undone and hanging effortlessly, hair tousled as though someone had just been running their hands through it. While looking entirely careless, he somehow looked put-together and powerful.